tell me what you think of this paragraph (really easy ten points)?
what can i add to this to make it more interesting so someone would want to read the whole report?
i was thinking about adding something after it says they are peaceful i would write but why must they be hunted and tortured for days then be slathered
or
i would write about how they gracefully swim through the water
Sea turtles are gorgeous and such peaceful creatures. There are seven types of sea turtles they are leatherback, loggerhead, olive ridley, Kemp’s ridley, flat back, hawksbill, and green sea turtle. Most sea turtles are endangered. The most endangered sea turtle is the Kemp’s ridley sea turtle.
if you copy and paste my paragraph and add detail to make it more interesting i wont copy the exact thing you write, i would re-word it(i am a hard worker and wouldnt cheat) or if you dont do that can you give me ideas of what to write
i have a full 4 page paper on them, but my mom said that the first paragraph needed to be spiced up so people would like to read the full 4 page paper
Endangered Species?
Okay, I need 3-4 names of endangered species [please give me website links as resources]
I would also want to see why each animal is endangered and where each species lives in the world.
I WOULD REALLY APPRECIATE THIS!!
ThX
[10 points for the first one to give me a full n correct answer!!] and i aint gonna be picky!
OH and website links are not necessary. i just need to know the species and reason why its endangered k thx! :]
would my speech still be considered a persuasive speech?
Hi i am doing a Persuasive speech for my Communications class. My topic is on persuading the audience to help keep the beaches clean. If i start to talk about Sea otters and how they can Directly affect us as humans, would that be off topic and would it be more of a Informative speech? What can i do to improve my speech?









